ABOUT

I volunteered to review the copy for a Daybreak charity's website. There were a lot of thick paragraphs, complex language and sentence construction, plus non-contextual links.

I agreed with my contact to send him tracked copy changes so they could review my suggestions. I also included notes to help explain many of my suggestions.

I broke up the copy into smaller paragraphs, simplified much of the language and sentence structure and included contextual links.

I reviewed updates in a preview environment and sent final suggestions ahead of relaunch.

I also advised on accessibility issues the site had with colour contrasting, which also got updated.

My recommendations were received well and implemented, with a letter of thanks from the CEO.