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I have been trying to develop my ideas for this project and using colour as I tend to favour monochrome or tonal works.
I would value any opinions and anyone's expertise.
Another verse form the poem/story-

Towitt Towitt came a loud cry
Boar knew it was owl, and breathed a sigh
Relieved it was his dear wise friend
He told him his problems, his ear he did bend
Owl listened to Boar, his eyes did stare
Boar told of Brocks sadness, and how this was rare
Owl rolled his eyes like two large balls
Then stretched and flicked out his large claws
Do you love you Brock so dear
Have you told her this, was your message clear?
I tell her I love all the time, Boar said
But do you show her, Owl rotated his head.
Boar thougt about this he knew owl was right
He thanked the him kindly and set off in the night
Feeling hungry and tired he needed a nap
He ate some pie that he took from his rucksack.
The pie was nice, but Boar felt sad
Being away from Brock made him feel really bad.